8 Writers + Flow = 2 x Free-flowing Poems

We’re delighted to share two new collaborative poems written during WRAP workshops.

‘Using the theme of crowds, members of the group were asked to describe their personal feelings of being in a crowded public space, and then separately, to create a visceral metaphor for a crowd’, explains workshop leader Paul Adey. ‘These feelings and metaphors were then organised and edited by the group into two separate poems.’

Sophie Clay, a second year Law student, reflects on the workshop: ‘When writing my parts of the poems, I was taken back to pre-Covid times, imagining myself back in nightclubs and in busy places. This conjured up a number of emotions; excitement and happiness but also a sense of anxiety and confusion about getting back to normal life. I was happy with the end result; seeing the poems put together and how well our own lines fit made me realise that other people are feeling the same way.’


Hopeful Dread

The electricity enters through the ground,
the air and from the touch; I become a lightning bolt,
she becomes a spark, we are charged.
I feel more alert, awake, than in years.
Full beam.

I was enjoying the music
but the immensity of the crowd
was starting to make me feel like I was
drowning in the sea of people which I did not know.

The crowd sticks to the floor like Velcro,
swaying lullaby.

The anxiety exhumed from the bodies of each person in the crowd,
like the ghosts, the shells of the people, resurfacing.
like how a hurricane drags along dust,
I was swirled to the other end of the room.

Their body heat hit my skin as strong as rays from the sun
piercing through the ozone layer.
the crowd gathered around me
like the ocean around a small island.
I was just one in a million.

Turn the Music Down Please

Sweat turns to steam and drives the motor,
turning the wheels of vinyl moving the crowd with the electricity generated,
my heartbeat a zig-zag, short hot breaths test my lung capacity,
they were worker drones, OD’ing on spilt Fanta

The stairs, each step, the wood shakes beneath my feet,
the lights, flicker, spilling through the cracks in the doorway approaching,
the smell, warm flesh.

I feel my eyes close pretending the noise is ocean waves
and nothing but empty space surrounds me.
I huddled myself in a corner, and I start looking out at the crowd in the room.
They seemed like a demonic power had come over them,
and that an exorcism needed to be performed.

I was lost. Not lost as most people would think, in a supermarket or on a street,
but lost.

lost in the music, the atmosphere. I was lost here but I also belonged here.
How is that possible?
The water from their bodies was mixing with their drinks but who cared?
Thoughts of home, thoughts of bed were starting to consume me.
And then it hit me –

I hate it here.

Paul Adey
Sophie Clay
Justyna Cuglewska
Munashe Dziva
Hannah Gascoyne
Alessandra Leone
John Lewell
Nadia Saleem




About Sophie Clay

Sophie has had a passion for creative writing throughout her life and did not want this to end. After seeing the WRAP workshops advertised on NOW, she began joining in order to get her brain creatively thinking again and to get back into writing.

About Paul Adey

WRAP Lead Writer Paul Adey, who joined the writer team this term, has been a practitioner of hip-hop lyricism for nearly twenty years under the name of Cappo. Throughout his career, he has performed at many of the UK and Europe’s premier live music venues, and published music on various record labels.

Paul wanted to bring his creative writing expertise and free-flowing energy to our programme, and these poems came out of a session he planned and delivered earlier in March.

Writing Masterclass with Ashley Hickson-Lovence

Last December, I got my first chance to attend a WRAP session, watching WRAP Live! with Derek Owusu via YouTube, and it was amazing. Last week, I got the chance to attend my first WRAP masterclass with writer and poet, Ashley Hickson-Lovence, author of The 392, this term’s WRAP recommended read. Ashley is writing his second novel as part of a PhD in Creative Writing at the University of East Anglia. The evening started off with introductions, chit-chat and familiarising ourselves with one another before we got down to business.

We started doing a series of tasks, split into coloured sections (typically yellow and green); Looking back on it now, I noticed that picked more of the yellow tasks than the green ones. The first task featured us writing about a picture featuring a crime scene outside a pub. It was splendid and bizarre to see, given it is all that we have been craving. We had to start the sentence with ‘I witnessed the police coming to arrest two men’, as a picture of two men, with one of them being on the floor, was shown on the slide. The photograph evoked scenes of police brutality: a timely theme in real life that I never thought would eventually lead me to write so much as a full page’s worth. The task was fun. It got me writing and it got my creative juices flowing.

Each task after that was quite interesting because Ashley exposed us to different writing techniques and styles. I learnt a lot from it, such as when to use longer sentences and when it is OK to use shorter ones and how it is not necessary to have so many words on a page, but to make sure the quality is good. Quality over quantity. The task highlights of the event for me were getting to break down characters into basics to see how they became starting off from their outward appearance down to their names, traits, how they think, who they are and everything in between and writing dialogue about a dinner date at a fast-food place. I picked McDonald’s and wrote a love story between two people, from the perspective of the female character. It was incredible to see how I could write solely from one person’s point of view. Overall, it was an impressive night, and I was glad to have attended. I now also hope my writing improves in the meantime too. I cannot wait to see Ashley again this month where he will be having another session with WRAP.

Ashley joins WRAP for our Evening Bookgroup on Monday 15th March, and you can book your free place for WRAP Live! In Conversation with Ashley Hickson-Lovence here.

About Zachary Omitowoju

Zach joined WRAP this year and is enjoying coming along to WRAP writing workshops, as well as refining his work at the Saturday Writing and Editing workshop. He is a 2nd year student in BA (Hons) Media Production in the School of Arts and Humanities.